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    That men should be so
    indiscriminate,
    with whom shall hold His vial
    the vine, now pressed,
    to holy blood transformed,
    clutched by hands,
    ceremonially cleansed,
    and yet, by vulgar deeds,
    sullied.

    The lambs,
    vested to predatory shepherds,
    with temerity,
    neglecting virtue,
    whilst at knees bended,
    petition, whom one
    determines to betray?

    Tis a crime of precipitous fall.
    Tis a pox.
    A scourge.
    A pall.
    Pray the Lord,
    suspend his mercy,
    and take vengeance
    on them all!
    Last edited by DWAYNE; 05-12-2016, 10:20 PM.

  • #2
    This is outrage of biblical proportions, Dwayne! Well done!

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    • #3
      Some in my own family still struggle over this. I understand the sentiment well.

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      • #4
        Do you mean 'vial' rather than 'vile' in line three?

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        • DWAYNE
          DWAYNE commented
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          So I do!


          Your editorial skills are much appreciated!

          Once again, many thanks.

          It would truly have been VILE to leave the error as is!

        • grant hayes
          grant hayes commented
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          Yes, I thought you might feel that way ☺

      • #5
        It is an incomprehensible atrocity. The way you penned this outrage is like getting hit right between the eyes. Wonderful job!!

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