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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    and we can all echo this too, I'm sure, from time to time. But, at least you didn't start your comment with 'woe'. That would take a whole different poem! Thank you for the like and comment Grant.

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    This is another comforting comment to read Dwayne. Thank you! I can easily return the compliment because I feel the same about your works!

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Aw, thanks Bobby. A vote of confidence is the very best cure! You are welcome. Friends here in the zone make it easy to find and state the positive!

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Thanks AtL. It stops me in my tracks more often than I'd like to admit.

  • grant hayes
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    Doubt is me

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  • DWAYNE
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    I don't doubt your talent!

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  • grant hayes
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    I've also used Shrek's really really with my daughters. ☺

  • Bobby Del Boy
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    Never doubted you for a minute RLW! And thank you for always being so encouraging and generous with your commentary.

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Doubt can be debilitating. Wonderfully captured RLW.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Thanks MHenry. This was the weirdest write for me in awhile. I don't know exactly what I had in mind, but the title, 'Really, Really' was from a line in the Shrek movie. I don't remember the exact scene, but I know the response (of assurance) from the Shrek is character is 'Really, really'. It comes up often in conversation in my family for some reason. I thought something lighthearted would develop - but I was trying to finish it so I could go back and work on the other challenge you posed for me, so perhaps my scattered attention caused the diversion. Thanks for the like!

  • MHenry
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    Doubt, a constant, irritating bedfellow, which cannot be cast out with permanence.
    A thoughtful and pleasing write, RLW!

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Really Really

    Doubt can be a funny thing – takes us for a spin
    Turns our world all round-about – does our courage in
    Sometimes sneaky, sometimes bold – most annoying pest
    Paints our skies all dank and dark – sapping joyful zest

    Why this fellow seeks us out? – haven’t got a clue
    Wallowing, a choice we spurn – even as we stew
    So it seems a right good thing – just to analyze
    Why uncertainty comes round – messing with our guise

    Have we really gone astray – left our egos bare?
    Are there really, really things – that we ought not dare?
    Can we really reach the crest – if we never try?
    Could we really, really best – such a loathsome guy?

    He (or she) will have to know – or at least attempt
    Choice to make – bend or break – no one is exempt.
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