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    He who cums alone
    Sits in darken room content
    On spilling his spue
    Last edited by Odonko-ba; 05-11-2016, 01:46 PM.

  • #2
    Dark and true!!

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    • Odonko-ba
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      Thanks my friend

  • #3
    Sad sort of contentment this. Why a Mind Game? I'm curious of the title.

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    • #4
      In order to achieve success one would have to sort of mind dance with his or herself. Create illusions. A mirage of the mind. To become an astronaut one must blast off.

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      • RhymeLovingWriter
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        Sometimes my tendency toward obtuseness frustrates me. Thank you for taking time to explain.

      • Odonko-ba
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        My pleasure. No pun intended.

    • #5
      I love mirage of the mind and mind dance with him or herself. Great explanation and the making of a new poem.

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      • #6
        Yes but not for me I'm sick right now and it's bad.

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        • RhymeLovingWriter
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          I'm sorry to hear that friend. Would you mind if I prayed for healing, comfort, and hope?

      • #7
        RLW it's just a benign case of writers block but I can use a prayer. Thank you my friend.

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        • #8
          The lonely substitute for love... Touching and humorous at the same time O-b
          Forgive my personal take on your haiku...

          As I pleasure me
          I can think only of you
          Climax unfulfilled

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          • imrogue
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            The mind in the dark needs prayer...I do, I do!

          • Odonko-ba
            Odonko-ba commented
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            Thanks poet. If not for hands what would the lonely do?

        • #9
          lol

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