Love's Hope

[AlexandratheLate]

Love's Hope

Who can contain space and control the time
Draw and direct the winds in a paradigm
What's it like to unravel the sun's rays
Spin into fine threads of golden bouquets

Your smile lights the skies like meteor showers
Your eyes deep black pools shames even sorrow
Your hair outshines the early mornings dew
Your lips plump, stealing the strongest virtue

Who can capture such a beautiful dream
Who can rent reality's faithful seams
You inspire a hope to capture the moon
To taste, be enveloped in loves first bloom

[RhymeLovingWriter]

Oh this is wonderful AtL! You pose the question - and I felt the answer in your rhyme all along the way! Simply beautiful!

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much RLW for such supportive and wonderful comments

[Bobby Del Boy]

Love this Alexandra. I started to write that I especially loved the first stanza,but I read again and felt, they're all great!

[AlexandratheLate]

Oh Bobby my dear friend, thank you very much. :-)

[DWAYNE]

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!

Now we're talking!

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Dwayne. I have a hope for love to find me. :-)

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much for the like BDB. :-)

[imrogue]

love this! beautiful AtL!

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much imrogue for reading and your kind comments. :-)

[imrogue]

You are welcome AtL! It's a pleasure

[MHenry]

Hi, AG, Another great work! I especially love this...

What's it like to unravel the sun's rays
Spin into fine threads of golden bouquets

[AlexandratheLate]

That is my favorite line too MH. Thank you for your kind comments.

[MHenry]

Reminiscent of Rumpelstiltskin!

[grant hayes]

For some reason I missed this one: the beloved praised to the skies, quite literally! Again, your near-rhyme sings, and you create a vision in which the elements themselves are responsive to your ardour and devotion.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Grant. I love astronomy and it's beauty.

[Parkinsonspoet]

I not only read loves hope.I felt it. Thank you.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you parkinsonspoet for your kind comments.

[AlexandratheLate]

Hey MH. I wasn't even thinking of Rumplestiltskin. I crochet but spin the rays like thread sounded better than crocheting lol.

[Guest]

You inspire a hope to capture the moon! Love that. Great poem

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Rach for your wonderful comment. :-)