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    Love's Hope

    Who can contain space and control the time
    Draw and direct the winds in a paradigm
    What's it like to unravel the sun's rays
    Spin into fine threads of golden bouquets

    Your smile lights the skies like meteor showers
    Your eyes deep black pools shames even sorrow
    Your hair outshines the early mornings dew
    Your lips plump, stealing the strongest virtue

    Who can capture such a beautiful dream
    Who can rent reality's faithful seams
    You inspire a hope to capture the moon
    To taste, be enveloped in loves first bloom

  • #2
    Oh this is wonderful AtL! You pose the question - and I felt the answer in your rhyme all along the way! Simply beautiful!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much RLW for such supportive and wonderful comments

  • #3
    Love this Alexandra. I started to write that I especially loved the first stanza,but I read again and felt, they're all great!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Oh Bobby my dear friend, thank you very much. :-)

  • #4
    THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!

    Now we're talking!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much Dwayne. I have a hope for love to find me. :-)

  • #5
    Thank you very much for the like BDB. :-)

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    • #6
      love this! beautiful AtL!

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      • #7
        Thank you very much imrogue for reading and your kind comments. :-)

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        • imrogue
          imrogue commented
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          You are welcome AtL! It's a pleasure

      • #8
        Hi, AG, Another great work! I especially love this...

        What's it like to unravel the sun's rays
        Spin into fine threads of golden bouquets

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        • #9
          That is my favorite line too MH. Thank you for your kind comments.

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          • MHenry
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            Reminiscent of Rumpelstiltskin!

        • #10
          For some reason I missed this one: the beloved praised to the skies, quite literally! Again, your near-rhyme sings, and you create a vision in which the elements themselves are responsive to your ardour and devotion.

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          • AlexandratheLate
            AlexandratheLate commented
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            Thank you very much Grant. I love astronomy and it's beauty.

        • #11
          I not only read loves hope.I felt it. Thank you.

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          • AlexandratheLate
            AlexandratheLate commented
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            Thank you parkinsonspoet for your kind comments.

        • #12
          Hey MH. I wasn't even thinking of Rumplestiltskin. I crochet but spin the rays like thread sounded better than crocheting lol.

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          • #13
            You inspire a hope to capture the moon! Love that. Great poem

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            • #14
              Thank you very much Rach for your wonderful comment. :-)

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