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    Beautiful smiles... pearly whites show
    bedimpled cheeks... and your afterglow!
    Warm hugs and sweet kisses
    desserts after delicious dishes.
    Lullaby hums and stroking fingers
    through my hair... I still remember!
    Motion after motion
    No preconceived notion...
    This is love...
    coming from above!
    Your personae,
    Like the City of Mycenae
    Tender lovings, ever so mild...
    You gave so much to this orphan child!



    Note: City of Mycenae (rich in gold, known to be a well-founded citadel) as accounted by Homer from Iliad

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    Last edited by imrogue; 05-09-2016, 01:34 PM.

  • #2
    Such beautiful language - describing a good place to be. It speaks of contentment to me. Nice write imrogue!

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    • #3
      Thank you for reading RLW. This is a tribute to my beloved aunt who took care of me as a child. She also the same person I am referring to in my poem the 'Last Goodbye' I miss her so much 😔

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      • RhymeLovingWriter
        RhymeLovingWriter commented
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        I just went and found that one - I think it may have been before I singed up here. Beautiful tribute. Your words certainly honor her and speak of a wonderful relationship; no wonder you are grieving loss of her presence. May you find comfort in continuing to share in your verse the ways she blessed your life.

    • #4
      Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate it.

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      • #5
        Beautiful

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        • imrogue
          imrogue commented
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          Thanks Rach79

      • #6
        A warm and wonderful write imrogue. I am truly sorry for your loss. You've shown your love for her in an adoring manner.

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        • imrogue
          imrogue commented
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          Thank you Archer

      • #7
        Hi, imrogue, this is a tender and heart warming tribute poem. It's a real feel good poem! I had several nurturing aunts and I remember them all fondly, so I am with you on this. Great write!

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        • imrogue
          imrogue commented
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          thanks MHenry!
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