Blue - Tanka collaboration with MHENRY

[Suz-zen]

graydon, mil gracias!! happy happy happy to read this!!

[graydon archer]

BRAVO to both poets! Thus the glutton of verse cries; MORE, MORE, MORE !

[Suz-zen]

absolutely legal! Before dawn I read this again and I like it too!! Thank you for this! I look forward to more!! Long day of that thing that starts that letter W today! Happy Monday all!!

[MHenry]

Is it legal for me like something in which I have partial authorship? Well, my like is Suz-zen's contribution, so I found a loophole!

[Suz-zen]

Blue eyes sail away
Slowly merge with horizon
Sea is empty now
Reflected in vacant eyes
Mourning their final goodbye