Forever Blind

[imrogue]

Find me reasons
to be true to my heart
You broke it once,
twice...
keeping my eyes
forever blind.



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[RhymeLovingWriter]

I've heard it said that 'love is blind'. Sometimes willingly so - it sounds like in this case - not so much. Very much hoping third time is the 'charm' for you imrogue.

[MHenry]

I know I am the 'Prince of Darkness,' but there is a lot of pain here.
I did ask for agony, but not 'real' agony.
That just hurts too much.

Clever and poignant all at once, imrogue.
Succinct and powerful.
Thanks for sharing.

[imrogue]

I'm humbled by your comments. thank you for reading.

[grant hayes]

Eloquent and strong. A gem.

[imrogue]

I really appreciate the comment coming from a pro. Thanks for reading.

[Katray]

Honesty shines through the brokenness; very well done!

[imrogue]

Thank you for reading and for commenting. I really appreciate it coming from you

[AlexandratheLate]

This is beautifully painful and all too real for many people.

[imrogue]

so true AlexandratheLate...so true. thanks for reading and commenting I really appreciate the comments.