Desire part 2

[Parkinsonspoet]

Desire the fire that burns
Desire the fire that yearns
Desire the fire that turns

I dress for the party
Nothing to tarty
Feel like a goddess
Heels and black dress

Hair down on bare shoulder
Started to smoulder
As I feel his gaze from behind
I know whats on his mind

Thoughts excite me
His desire requites me
All my body knows
I curl my toes

But this is wrong
With my husband I belong
As i exit the room
Butterflies in my womb

Desire still burns
Desire still yearns
Desire still turns
Desire still churns
Desire doesn't learn

Then turn the corner
Horny performer
Stood Face to face
Eyes lock in embrace

He touched my hand
Felt sparks fly and
Our touch did linger
Damn ring on my finger

I look in his eyes
Itch between my thighs
Taken by surprise
Body wants his prize

I drag myself away
Still he doesn't say
He touches my shoulder
Grips my soul here

I must go before I melt
My desire is heartfelt
One last lustful look
No more chances took

Later on I feel guilty
Husband starts paws me
Envision tender lover
Betray thoughts of another

I take him inside
And moan as I ride
I scratch as we rut
Lust with no but

I am overcome
ladyparts joysome
As I am consumed
My libido exhumed

I feel alive but unfulflled
My honesty killed
Felt like three in the bed
But only two in my head

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I've read all three parts of this Parkinsonspoet, and am still ruminating. But I had to respond to the last two lines in this in particular. Searing! You have captured raw human experience here in a way that begs reflection and introspection. Epic effort. Now I'm off to ponder further.

[Parkinsonspoet]

Wow to provoke so much thoughtis fantastic. I did have an objective in mind when writing these three but I wanted feedback before explaining. If anything occurs to you that you cant write in open forum please pm.

[MHenry]

Great job with this Pp! I didn't know you had that effect on women!
More like this! Oh, there are two others. I must find them. I am in the middle.

[Parkinsonspoet]

All three are already posted-still not quite sure what effect i have on women

[grant hayes]

Strewth, Parkinsonspoet, this is a powerful study of infidelity that compels without becoming preachy. You know how to hold the attention.

[Parkinsonspoet]

Grant thank you this is part of a set of three but so far most of the response came to number 2. I would be interested in any opinions on 1 and 3

[grant hayes]

I can see how this one is the counterpart to part 1, giving the woman's view of the fleeting contact with the man of part 1, and the aftermath, in which she still has thoughts of him as she has sex with her husband. I note the similar -urn rhyming stanzas here as in part 1, and the complementarity of part 1 man's observation of the woman's physical attributes with her own in part 2. Now for part 3.