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  • Am I asking too much?

    Am I asking too much?

    I want to dance and find romance
    I want to jump, my foot to stomp
    I want to scream , have my own dreams
    I want to play and be okay
    I want to be kissed, and have a tryst
    I want to be held, and with my lover meld
    I want to sing, but not too much bling
    Play on the swing and grow my own wings
    I want to fly , and soar through the sky
    I want to defy gravity, even enjoy a little insanity
    I want you to look at me with desire, enjoy life till the day I expire
    I don’t know so don’t ask me why, get out of this rut they tell us is life

  • #2
    Sounds beautifully reasonable to me AtL! May this and more be the fate of each of us.

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      I like that! Thank you for commenting.

  • #3
    You ask, no more than the rest of us!

    Well written.

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank Dwayne our insightful poet. :-)

  • #4
    Love it!

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  • #5
    Just don't use it as a checklist. Repeats are okay.

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  • #6
    A great idea, nothing in the way when we clear the weeds, so to speak.. Excellently written and thought evoking.

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you Katray. I was just trying to get inspired and having fun.

  • #7
    You sure want a lot of things, Ms. Daisy! And I hope you have them all. Thanks for the uplifting romp through desire, AG!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Lol MH. meaningful life with play with someone special - not the life they tell us is life with mostly materialistic things. I think most of us work ourselves to death and end up alone and too old to enjoy life. :-).

  • #8
    I don't think your asking too much AT ALL!
    You wrote:

    I want to sing, but not too much bling

    Which Demonstrates a very down to earth attitude,
    That IS NOT MATERIALISTICALLY ORIENTATED!

    And that's a very GENUINE sentiment to express!

    AND
    You wrote:
    I want to defy gravity, even enjoy a little insanity

    WELL....?
    What can I say?

    I love being MENTAL LOL LOL

    Technically your rhyme had great EXTENT...
    Which clearly demonstrates an extensive command over our vocabulary.

    And that separates you from being?
    Good, to BEING GREAT!

    I loved it HEAPS!
    And it really invoked a clear vision of your desires.
    Excellent work.

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you Billie. You got what I was talking about - I know we need things to live but we need love, relationships, play time and even silliness in this harsh demanding unforgiving world.

  • #9
    It's funny you should say that....

    I've a degree in I.T. & a minor in small business Management.

    So although I LOVE USING THE INTERNET,
    I can't spend too long on it...

    Coz as you said, there are SO MANY OTHER THINGS TO DO!

    Sometimes I worry about others ( even in this forum )
    Whom may not be living a BALANCED LIFE?

    And ultimately their HEALTH MAY SUFFER...?

    On that note:
    I'm signing off for today.

    It's Saturday Night here....
    And I need to be naughty lol lol.

    All my deepest wishes.

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