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    Into The Storm

    Lowering clouds, burgeoning, bruised;
    The air with eerie light is suffused.
    An approaching angry, rumbling sound
    sends 'roos leaping hurriedly, homeward bound.

    The wind gathers strength and sends gust after gust
    bearing vast burdens of thick, blinding dust.
    The trees begin swaying, the leaves start to fly
    and a flock of corellas wings raucously by.

    A few drops at first; little craters they form -
    steam rises in wisps from soil still sun-warm.
    Now small pools puddle upon the ground
    and eddies of floaters spin 'round and around.

    Rain, blessed rain! And rivulets run
    along the ground to join as one
    to fill the cracks the sun has dried out,
    slaking the thirst after years of drought.

    The rain falls heavier, the drops are huge -
    It's many a year since such a deluge
    has graced this land where one family has dwelt
    - with varying fortunes their lives have been dealt.

    A flash splits the sky; another, then more
    and the wet, driving rain is a mighty downpour -
    soaks deep in the dust; into mud now it's changed,
    and the heavens bellow like demons deranged.

    And whilst the storm rages a vehicle arrives
    and through the home gateway a young man drives:
    This is his birthright, this farming lad,
    bound by his lineage to bide, good or bad.

    Here's promise at last for this land that he owns
    (although up to his neck in large banking loans)
    At least with this rain he can now sew his crop
    and perhaps make enough to come out on top…

    He crosses the yard with a spring in his stride
    to his old family home with verandas so wide -
    and this farmer, buoyant with hope and with pride
    steps over the threshold, carrying his bride.

  • #2
    AMEN Rain Blessed Rain...

    A very high quality piece, that VIVIDLY DESCRIBES OUTBACK AUSTRALIA.

    Aussie Aussie Aussie. Oi Oi Oi...

    Your a true poet. With great Skills.

    Well Done. Bravo.

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    • #3
      Lovely lines - full of hope.

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      • #4
        Very nice job using words to build intensity as the storm strengthens. And then a beautiful beginning - at the close. Nicely done Mariont3155!

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        • #5
          Well done, Marion! A work of art! The Aussie Grapes of Wrath with a happy ending!

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          • Mariont3155
            Mariont3155 commented
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            Thank you MHenry. A great compliment indeed!

        • #6
          Wow. Such vivid imagery.
          Well written prose. Eloquent.

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          • #7
            I like this poem! Mariont3155 My grandparents were farmers and the rain was always such a big event in our lives!! Thanks for this lovely trip!
            The last stanza had me smiling ear to ear!
            crosses the yard with a spring in his stride
            to his old family home with verandas so wide -
            and this farmer, buoyant with hope and with pride
            steps over the threshold, carrying his bride.

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            • #8
              I enjoyed the intensity in this and expectations with hope and then relief and joy -- I had my half acre garden and always was relieved when we had wonderful rainy seasons - had the best corn on the Cobb and tomatoes.

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              • #9
                What a lovely poem! I love the old country imagery... You took me there Marion... Thank you for sharing!

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