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  • grant hayes
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    Mate, you monger eons, roots, God, and evil - the whole damn show - with aplomb. Gotta love the eons. Zesta!

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Hey Divot. Clever write!!

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  • MHenry
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    Hi, divot, I like this! It is a clever juxtaposition showing how nature is interdependent.

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  • Guest's Avatar
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    Great job as usual Divot! Awesome

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  • Sumyanna
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    Wonderful poems. Yes, it is definitely about balance.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    It's all about the right balance...but the beauty...that's worth preserving. Nicely done divot.

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  • divot
    started a topic A whisper in the trees

    A whisper in the trees

    I heard it. Carbon dioxide is a bad thing? Without it we’d be out of Oxygen.

    Thank God, that trees exhale
    I’m sure they thank us back in kind
    Yet when counting up the numbers
    Humans lag behind

    Seems we can’t exhale enough
    With the hot air that we blow
    Can’t replace a dinosaur
    So the good earth gave us coal

    Compacted over eons
    Their ancestors lay for years
    Deep below the roots called evil
    Let the trees all stand and cheer

    To breath the air so pure
    When infused with carbon
    So burn it proud my friend
    The plants they have no problem
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