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  • Shipwreck

    on the ocean
    Last edited by pipersfancy; 05-06-2016, 07:25 PM.

  • #2
    I like what you did with this, Piper, in exploring the lengths the desperate will go to save themselves.

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    • #3
      I hate this feeling - even though you write it so well. Kudos pipersfancy - for getting to the heart again.
      Last edited by RhymeLovingWriter; 05-02-2016, 07:08 AM.

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      • #4
        Hi pf, very nice. I like this a lot.

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        • #5
          Wonderful, pf, I can feel myself drowning, helpless against the vast, dark power of the ocean. Earth's own black hole.
          The closing lines, the hope and heartbreak of those left behind, an apt ending.

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