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    ​​​​​I had some fun
    With some deer
    We made some runs
    Not for beers

    I collected nuts
    With the squirrels
    It's a lot of nuts
    In the world

    I fell asleep
    Counting sheep
    I know the wolves
    Try to creep

    Got a ride from a horse
    Seen a cow
    There's cattle in a church
    Holy cow......

    So I prayed with a mantis
    I'm so lost like Atlantis
    And then I spoke to a parrot
    Raced a rabbit for a carrot

    I bought a new raft
    At the marina
    Then shared a few laughs
    With the hyenas

    Due to heavy flooding
    Had to tip toe
    I also went mudding
    With a hippo

    Pigs in a blanket
    Not hogs
    "Chow" at the banquet
    Hotdogs

    Technology,
    "It's a lot of damn buildings"
    Literally said.......
    The beavers dam building

    A kiss from a frog
    A hiss from a snake
    A lick from a dog
    I get what it takes

    I've bonded with animals
    Just like the people
    Our dependence on each other
    Still remains equal


    Read Animal Bonding Community 2 and look out for 3
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    Last edited by Poemahontas; 05-24-2018, 08:59 PM. Reason: Added picture

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    A. B. C.

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    • #3
      I fell asleep
      Counting sheep
      I know the wolves
      Try to creep......

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      • #4
        I collected nuts
        With the squirrels
        It's a lot of nuts
        In the world......

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        • #5
          I write for free
          It's the LOVE in me
          It's therapy
          My ComeUnity

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          • #6
            Clever, clever, clever Poemahontas - I love the word play here!

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            • Poemahontas
              Poemahontas commented
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              Thank you RhymeLovingWriter......your reviews/ feedback always feel authentic

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            A.B.C. Animal Bonding ComeUnity

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            • RhymeLovingWriter
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              Oh man - that went right over my head the first time. More cleverness from the Poemahontas!

          • #8
            I love this poem......I'm my own number 1 fan......my motivation comes from above

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            • #9
              A kiss from a frog
              A hiss from a snake
              A lick from a dog
              I get what it takes

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              • #10
                I prayed with a mantis
                I'm so lost like Atlantis

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                • #11
                  I spooned an Armadillo
                  It waited on mypillow
                  I rode a horse
                  Straddle saddle of course

                  I love the poem too felt I had to join in

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                  • Poemahontas
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                    I pocket dialed sears
                    Now it's crocodile tears
                    The flock is not here
                    So I'm rocking my chair

                • #12
                  I read all poetry out-loud, more than I read it silently. What a treat to read yours with my ears to hear your work. I say the next sentence that follows often, why stop now especially when it is true? Never are there too many mighty steeds on an awesome track that is not a race. You're certainly talented.

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                  • #13
                    It's reviews like this that makes do better than I can even imagine, you've lifted my spirit and made my day.....thank you J.Robert Marquis

                    You're too sweet
                    A honeybee
                    Hope you see
                    A money tree

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                    • #14
                      Poemahontas, I especially liked the comparisons you made between animals and humans. Quite a smart comparison. Great job!!

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                      • #15
                        Thanks for reading and your feedback

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