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    The ones so insecure
    seemingly awkward
    in your eyes
    Show forth quiet
    confidence while
    you sit idly by

    Just where do
    you belong
    or
    what purpose do
    you serve

    Not a purpose
    but the One

    And still as
    quiet as a mouse
    Last edited by RhymeLovingWriter; 05-01-2016, 12:29 AM.

  • #2
    Oh so very very smart. This is outstanding observation and insight RLW!!! Your technique perfect to force one to think.

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      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you Alexandra. It was just a reflection that came to me between sessions today at my very first writer's conference. I am exhausted now - but it was nice to be able to pen something during the day to relieve stress. I was very nervous and don't exactly know why.

  • #3
    Oh, I love this. How quietly powerful...

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      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you Sister Greed - it feels that way to me too. This is not my usual style - but it feels right.
      Last edited by RhymeLovingWriter; 05-01-2016, 11:07 AM.

  • #4
    Beautiful Irony, the truth. I like it.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you BW, for the like and comment.

  • #5
    Hi, RLW, That is a powerful statement artfully posed.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks MHenry. It feels that way to me...like a truth that snuck up on me.

  • #6
    A wonderful write RLW, delivered with perfect eloquence !

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you Graydon. I'm not usually known for eloquence, so this is particularly nice to hear.

  • #7
    Hey, it doesn't rhyme!

    And it is a GEM!

    More please, Rhymist. ☺

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks Grant. Yes, I was as surprised as anyone that words actually wanted out NOT in a rhyming fashion.Kind of nice for a change.I too hope there will be more to come.
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