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    One day
    I met a boy

    He made my heart pound
    I said to myself
    I am in love

    I could have had him
    He asked me out
    And I was scared

    So I said no
    And I was sad

    I made a bad choice
    I could have been his
    And he would have been
    Mine

    We could have been
    Together



    Written by Lailah my 8-year-old niece. What a beautiful soul

  • #2
    That's beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

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    • #3
      Yes she's quite the wordsmith. Thank you poetess.

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      • #4
        Cool, sounds like it may run in the family. It would make me proud so I know you are proud

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        • Odonko-ba
          Odonko-ba commented
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          Yes I am Brain. Thank you.

      • #5
        a lot to be proud of. compliments to the young lady

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        • #6
          Thank you Sir

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          • #7
            8 years old?? Amazing! So glad to see you are encouraging this! Tell her - nicely done.

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            • Odonko-ba
              Odonko-ba commented
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              Thank you, poetess. I will convey your thoughts. I know she will be please.

          • #8
            Hi, O-b. This is a great post! I wish I could say that all the girls who told me 'no,' regretted their bad decision. But, alas, I bet they are counting their lucky stars instead.

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            • #9
              She's doing very well, Odonko-ba. Kudos to her for her poetic precocity!

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