Powerful Repulsion

[imrogue]

A knock at the door...
I courteously opened
I received...
I obliged..

Thoughts flowed with mine...
procured creations,
fascinating at times...

...it was nice while it lasted...

...The drink turned sour...
From a ripe apple...
putrid inside its core,
emanated powerful repulsion.

I aired out the room...
The stench remains...
Like a curse...
Impossible to cast out.

...No options left...
It is time...
to walk out the door...
away from it all...
far, far away...




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[Robert Wendt]

Another wonderful poem. I only wish I had your ability to feel like that. You have a way about your writing that has its own rhythm, its own tone, and its beautiful.. Its a song a Psalm if you will and while you read, the reader can not help but hear music..

[MHenry]

An enduring sentiment. Well done, imrogue. I think I will post something I wrote that feels similar to me.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

It's beautiful - and it makes me a bit sad.

[grant hayes]

^ I agree with RhymeLovingWriter!