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  • Lighthearted Limerick Lover’s Plea to Writers

    If you find at writing you stumble,
    Perhaps gnawing hunger pangs rumble?
    Don’t pout and don’t swear.
    Get up from that chair.
    Even (if) sotto voce you mumble.

    Take moment to stretch your phalanges
    Dream float on a boat on the Ganges
    Whatever you try
    Don’t spit in the eye
    Of pirate muse, Malcolm Bojanges

    He casts words from mind as if jetsam
    A mean-minded sprite swilling dark rum
    He’ll make you say “Please”
    While cackling (the tease)
    “If you need new words, come and get some.”

    He’ll swing off like brigand retreating
    While ignoring incessant pleading
    He’ll wink once or twice
    But never play nice
    Persist till you’re weary from beating

    In thin air he’ll vanish while screaming
    Behind him long pirate locks streaming
    With rogue-favored flair
    And devil may care
    He’ll leave you convinced you were dreaming

    With start you’ll return to your senses
    Inspir’d, having flattened your fences
    The pangs you’ll ignore
    Pursuing new lore
    Mind(ing) p’s, q’s, and even some tenses

    ©RhymeLovingWriter
    Last edited by RhymeLovingWriter; 07-21-2016, 03:40 PM. Reason: Working on line counts for smoother recitation. 7-21-2016

  • #2
    Hi, RLW, This is a wonderful pirate's odyssey in search of words to purloin. I enjoyed reading this fine-flowing limerick!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks MHenry. I thought I was done for the day when I'd finished the sonnet, but there were more words needing release before I could put my head to pillow. I also started a song, but it's been many, many years since I've even attempted something like that, so I laid it aside for another time. Oh - and purloin away - I look forward to seeing those results!

    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      Coincidentally, I just finished off a similarly structured rhyming verse, but the meter and flow is poor. I don't know how to fix it without major surgery, and I lack Obamacare for the written word. I may just post as is in a day or so, and take me lumps...arrgghhh, avast... shiver me timbers...

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      You know, the funny thing is that when I started writing I had no idea it was going to take a pirate theme. When I got to the second stanza and had chosen phalanges (and didn't want to let that go), the only word I could think of was Ganges, and then a made-up name (not even a neologism technically) to finish that one in rhyme. And so, a pirate was created, and so went the rest. Anchors away...

  • #3
    This is what I love about writing! It's the horse that suddenly takes over halfway out to pasture, and we are thrilled to see where it takes us!

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    • #4
      Hahahahahahahahaha, what a splendidly rhymed witty romp, Rhymist! Zesta!

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      • RhymeLovingWriter
        RhymeLovingWriter commented
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        Thanks Grant - it was a nice way to end my day - with a little chuckle at myself!

    • #5
      hungry poets a far a you can see
      for in poems there is little money
      so your pirate so bold
      will have to look for gold
      somewhere else or settle for sundries
      Last edited by Chester B; 05-04-2016, 06:22 PM.

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      • RhymeLovingWriter
        RhymeLovingWriter commented
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        Oh yes Chester - truth in these words. Thanks for the read and poetic comment!

    • #6
      I think I know Malcolm Bojanges. I love the very last line.

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      • RhymeLovingWriter
        RhymeLovingWriter commented
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        Thanks Brain! That's pretty cool about knowing Malcolm since he came out of my imagination last night! Or wait, maybe he came out of yours and I was just channeling him into verse??? This Rhymezone experience keeps getting curioser and curioser....down the rabbit hole we go!

    • #7
      I did not even look Malcolm up. I just think I know him. I do know him. Channeling is on.

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      • #8
        Malcolm Bojanges, ready to take his place alongside Yeats' Michael Robartes and Eliot's Sweeney Todd?

        The patron piratical saint of the 'Zone? I think we need to hear some more about him, RhymeLovingWriter.

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        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          Oh no - what behemoth have I unearthed with this mirth? It can keep me in writing anyway. I think I will.

        • grant hayes
          grant hayes commented
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          Sounds like he might have a Scots mother and Creole/Haitian father to me. Surname originally Beauchange, roughened to Bojanges in the patois of the piratical demimonde.

        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          Times like this I wish I had studied French. It's still on my bucket list - or something I think I'd really like to know. I like your angle on lineage!

      • #9
        What an enthralling semantic waltz. Unlike your protagonist you are not at a loss for words. Thanks for sharing my friend.

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        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          Thank you Odonko-ba - although I can be a 'tad' long-winded at times. I have to keep at until the story/poem/whatever has written itself out or reached some kind of logical conclusion. I so appreciate those like you who can do that in fewer lines and with so much depth. Frivolity seems to be my current corner of creation!

      • #10
        This fun filled romp through the Rhymezone was brought to you by: RhymeLovingWriter

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        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          Thank you Graydon - this is RhymeLovingWriter and I endorse this message!

        • AlexandratheLate
          AlexandratheLate commented
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          My sentiments exactly. You are a gifted storyteller.

        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          Thank you Alexandra - that's a very nice compliment.

      • #11
        I really enjoyed this one! thanks RLW!

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      • #12
        yeah! MHenry pointed out this one when I commented his 'Son of a bitch' poem. I had to see it ... Im glad I did! awesome! 😊👍🏼👍🏼

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        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          TWO thumbs up? Thank you so much. I'm blushing!

      • #13
        If I have more thumbs, they'll be up too... big toes,ok?? lol 😘

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