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    Coloring books were so much fun.
    As a child, I kept my colors inside the lines...
    I was good at that!
    Afraid to go haywire,
    I also drew my lines
    straight as the strings of a lyre.

    As time goes on...
    unlike a coloring book,
    life presented itself
    with complications...
    and I find myself coloring it
    mostly, outside the lines.

    Tumultuous life created...
    However, the background
    is looking like colors
    and patterns
    in a rotating kaleidoscope.
    Though the meaning
    is yet unclear to me,
    thereโ€™s opportunity
    to discover it...
    and hopefully...
    ...in this lifetime.



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  • #2
    And we shall color and discover right along side you imrogue! Very nice!

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    • #3
      Great idea, and well spoken.

      "Afraid to go haywire,
      I also drew my lines
      straight as the strings of a lyre."

      Beautiful

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      • imrogue
        imrogue commented
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        Thanks, Grant! That's my favorite part of the poem! ๐Ÿ˜Š

    • #4
      imrogue, It is a very cute way express the serious age old question. If you think you can get back, haywire can be a lot of fun.
      I hope the word 'cute' is not a non-poetic word. I liked your poem.

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      • RhymeLovingWriter
        RhymeLovingWriter commented
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        Well, gee, I don't know Brainwreck...have you ever tried to use the word 'cute' in a poem? I'll wait around if you'd like to try....

      • imrogue
        imrogue commented
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        I bet it is! Although, no going back necessary... Lol. Will just pick up where I left off and move on with the fun! ๐Ÿ˜‰. Thanks for reading and commenting!

    • #5
      This poem reminds me of my friend Geoff who just passed, He loved to color outside the lines. Thank you
      Last edited by Chester B; 04-27-2016, 07:08 AM.

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      • imrogue
        imrogue commented
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        Sorry for your loss Chester B. Thanks for reading.. I'm glad this poem evoked some memories of your friend that I'm sure you cherish.
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