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    Happy dreams everyone!!


    Breezy Dreams: Midnight lover

    Through my be-darkened bedroom window cleft
    My lovers hands float in at nights request
    Gently howling and drifting, welcomed guest
    Fondling, kissing my skin, a willful quest

    Chilling and refreshing to my fervent dreams
    Shivering and cooling like the pale moon's beams
    sensual breeze caresses my breasts and thighs
    Swallows and recedes, muffling my moans and cries

    My lips and body fueled with delectable sensation
    This midnight lover departs, extinguishing temptation
    The aromatic scents I drank will loom til I expire
    rekindling this love in ecclesiastical attire

  • #2
    Oh, this is sensual diction and flow!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you Dwayne very much for your comments. I'm glad this poem accomplished what I intended.

  • #3
    This is a very erotic ode to the wind, which apparently has taken you without struggle or complaint. This is inspirational. I love it, AG!

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    • #4
      Thank you very much MH. Your comments mean a lot. I was feeling devilish lol!!

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      • MHenry
        MHenry commented
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        You should feel devilish more often. This is a very successful poem and suggests you have a lot more to say you haven't shown us yet.

    • #5
      Thank you Odonko-ba for the like. Coming from you it means a lot especially with some of your beautiful sensual writes. Thank you :-)

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      • #6
        Indeed you were. This is erotic without being vulgar. Beautifully written my friend.

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        • #7
          With a comment like that Odonko-ba I feel successful. Thank you for your comment. :-)

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          • #8
            Thank you for the like MH.

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            • #9
              MH, a woman has to keep some secrets, lol. I just let people peek in a little, lol. Thank you for the comment my poet friend. :-)

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              • #10
                Fair enough. I don't want to know all your secrets, I just want to peek a little...Is that legal?

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                • #11
                  Ah! The fantasy of debauching a celibate priest????

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                  • AlexandratheLate
                    AlexandratheLate commented
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                    Hey John W, I missed your thought provoking comment. In answer to your question, it can be if you want it to be - I was thinking less concrete and more like in connection with a spiritual experience or someone feeling like they needed church after those feelings and thoughts, lol. Thank you for reading and your question.

                • #12
                  MH, I believe it is in all 50 states, lol but a woman has to maintain some mystery. :-)

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                  • #13
                    Thank you very much for the likes Brain.

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                    • #14
                      Very sensuous, arousing and mysterious. I love cool weather, hmm...

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                      • #15
                        A cool breeze feels so good at night after a hot day. Thank you for the comment Brain, my poet friend. :-)

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