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    sensuous pleasures
    music and visage, Heaven
    tears of Purple Rain
    Last edited by Brainwreck; 04-24-2016, 07:44 PM.

  • #2
    He was absolutely beautiful, to be a man. He could also do his eyes way better than me.

    several alternatives...help appreciated.
    Last edited by Brainwreck; 04-23-2016, 07:31 PM.

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    • #3
      I think that says it all. And it's beautiful. Well done!!

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      • Brainwreck
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        Thank you, I had too may lines to narrow down. I may have another later.

    • #4
      There will never be another

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      • Brainwreck
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        Never another Prince. I am not sure I did him justice in that form of poem.

    • #5
      To sum up Prince in a Haiku -- extremely challenging -- but you did it perfectly. It's beautiful Brain. It really is.

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      • Brainwreck
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        AG, Better be careful, you'll give me the big head i mean the big brain.

    • #6
      Brain thats great

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      • Brainwreck
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        Thank you, that means a lot to me. I am not nor ever will be a poet. I think maybe a rapping rhymer.

    • #7
      All I wanted was "A little red Corvette" You continue to amaze

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      • Brainwreck
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        THank you. I had an only child cousin who bought her a little red corvette before she could legally drive. oh ,It was way
        before the song came out. Pace yourself with all the climbing you have ahead of you.
        Last edited by Brainwreck; 04-23-2016, 07:29 PM.

      • Robert Wendt
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        No worries Nan, You will always be cool with me

      • Brainwreck
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        Gee, that comment fell out jarbled. I had a cousin who was an only child. Her dad bought her a little red corvette before she even had a driver's
        license. And it was years before the song came out. ...Guess the last sentence really was a sentence. That comment does show
        the troubles I have had with English and writing. Even when I speak, it oftentimes is all muddled up.
        Last edited by Brainwreck; 04-25-2016, 10:14 PM. Reason: left out the word ' have'

    • #8
      Thank you for sharing your moving tribute!

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      • Brainwreck
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        Thank you,, Constil. I guess that death will always inspire poems whether it is a superstar everyone know or your little granddaughter, Amber.

    • #9
      Hi, Brainwreck, You have crafted a magnificent haiku! It is just beautiful! Congratulations!

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      • #10
        Wonderful, Brain, Bravo, I'm clapping! Prince was an absolute talent and will be deeply missed...The doves cry.

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        • #11
          Thank you, MHenry. Magnificent is sure a big word. Oh, I'll take it. I covered a whole page before I went with something.
          Crafted, I'll take that also.

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          • #12
            Katray, thank you. I don't get much out. He was truly a master of writing and being a musician. And very easy on the eye. I could look or stare for a long time.
            Thank you for the clapping also. hmm now to google pic's of Prince.

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            • #13
              When doves cry......heartfelt tribute....excellent haiku by the way

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              • Brainwreck
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                Thank you. I learn something everyday. I love the Zone.

            • #14
              Yippi hi lou loo who. look at the comments and likes. Ecstatic.

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