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  • I'll Be Along, My Love

    I could see the lonesome tree.
    Under draping branches, I did see thee.

    You held your straw hat;
    and waved it for a halt.

    Your sweet whisper in my ear
    gave me comfort and held my tears.

    “ I’ll be along, my love... go on ahead my dear .”
    You waved your hand, I know you’re near.

    My carriage trudged along dirt road
    to reach our home... our humble abode.

    You held my heart in thrall.
    Eyes fogged up as I recalled.

    I watched you standing there...
    until your image turned into a blur...



    20150415

  • #2
    For an "old guy" He's really good huh?

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      That's actually my mother's description of her dream when she dreamt of my dad after he passed away...

  • #3
    Sweet!

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    • #4
      Even though sad, I really liked reading this dream made into poetry.

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      • #5
        imrogue I could feel every word.

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        • #6
          This is a beautiful piece of work imrogue. You have ably captured the dream-like quality of your mother's... dream.

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