Your Fortune is in Another Cookie ( my homage to Dorothy Parker)

[Suz-zen]

Looked inside my cookie,
In it was your heart!
Beating out this message:
"NEVER SHALL WE PART"

In love, I tried to to kiss you,
You headed for the door.
Stupid little cookie!
One faulty ancient art!

[RhymeLovingWriter]

Suz-zen, I really enjoyed this. I had to go look up Dorothy Parker and found a site with some of her witticisms -very striking. I'd say you nailed it!

[Suz-zen]

Thanks so much! I am deeply grateful for this comment. I am a huge fan of hers! She was a tough dame with quite the colorful past. I love reading her... Being a woman in a mostly male dominated field of work i relate to her. I really like her "spunk"!

[MHenry]

Hi, Suz-zen, this is clever and amusing!

If I were filling fortune cookies, I would insert a blank strip of paper and a small pencil.
You might as well have the fortune you really want if you aren't going to get it anyway.

[Suz-zen]

MH!! hahahhahahaha!!! you made me really laugh this morning with my coffee!!You may have a million dollar idea here. Affirmation cookies!hmmmmmmmmmm! Copyright 2016!! LOL!!!! edible pencil ; written in chocolate?