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    Wind turbines stare far
    silent soldiers in atenttion
    waiting for air command

  • #2
    This is a great haiku, Martin. There are a lot of turbine farms going up in the Midwest, and though the structures are massive, they truly are at the mercy of mother nature's breath to make themselves useful.
    PS (Just a note about the typo for 'attention'.)

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    • #3
      The haiku is successful. Succinct, not long-winded, attention-grabbing. I enjoyed it, Martin. Thanks for sharing.

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      • #4
        "waiting for air command'' was a true aha moment. Nicely done.

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        • #5
          pleasure to hear wise voices

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