Venting

[Poemahontas]

Torn pictures
Broken mirrors
Sworn scriptures
Spoken clearer

Thugs in suits
Drugs to the youth
War for the troops
Afraid of the truth

Blood for oil
A poor man's fee
Rich and spoiled
Always agree

Speaking my mind
Not blasphemy
But there's pastors
Getting salaries

The church people
Might get mad at me
But God is love
And love is free......

[RhymeLovingWriter]

First off - I like your handle, 'Poemahontas' - very clever. Poetry is a great place to vent and there is much fuel for fodder these days. Nicely rhymed too. Great job!

[Poemahontas]

Thank you RhymeLovingWriter your words lifted my spirit, thank you

[Hawa Diawara]

I can't describe this in one word but a speech when I say I love this write

[Poemahontas]

Thank you so much Hawa Diawara, poetry is therapy for me.....your feedback is very motivational

[PoetryBree]

Same. Poetry is my personal therapy.

[Brainwreck]

I enjoyed reading this one and again out loud.

[Poemahontas]

Thank you brainwreck......poetry is therapy for me.....

[grant hayes]

It seems to me like it could be the lyric for an excellent song.

[Poemahontas]

Awesome review Grant Hayes, thank you for reading

[MHenry]

A great handle, Poemahontas, and a fine poem to make a point.

[Poemahontas]

MHenry, thank you for reading and your feedback, it's motivation

[Parkinsonspoet]

An excellent engaging rant thank you

[Poemahontas]

Venting

[Poemahontas]

Thank you Parkinsonspoet

[Poemahontas]

God is love and love is free

[Poemahontas]

God is love and love is free

[Guest]

Amen! Love it "God is love and love is free" so awesome

[Poemahontas]

Thank you Rach79.....God is love