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    Torn pictures
    Broken mirrors
    Sworn scriptures
    Spoken clearer

    Thugs in suits
    Drugs to the youth
    War for the troops
    Afraid of the truth

    Blood for oil
    A poor man's fee
    Rich and spoiled
    Always agree

    Speaking my mind
    Not blasphemy
    But there's pastors
    Getting salaries

    The church people
    Might get mad at me
    But God is love
    And love is free......
    Last edited by Poemahontas; 05-28-2016, 02:07 AM.

  • #2
    First off - I like your handle, 'Poemahontas' - very clever. Poetry is a great place to vent and there is much fuel for fodder these days. Nicely rhymed too. Great job!

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    • #3
      Thank you RhymeLovingWriter your words lifted my spirit, thank you

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      • #4
        I can't describe this in one word but a speech when I say I love this write

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        • #5
          Thank you so much Hawa Diawara, poetry is therapy for me.....your feedback is very motivational

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          • PoetryBree
            PoetryBree commented
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            Same. Poetry is my personal therapy.

        • #6
          I enjoyed reading this one and again out loud.

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          • Poemahontas
            Poemahontas commented
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            Thank you brainwreck......poetry is therapy for me.....

        • #7
          It seems to me like it could be the lyric for an excellent song.

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          • Poemahontas
            Poemahontas commented
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            Awesome review Grant Hayes, thank you for reading

        • #8
          A great handle, Poemahontas, and a fine poem to make a point.

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          • Poemahontas
            Poemahontas commented
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            MHenry, thank you for reading and your feedback, it's motivation

        • #9
          An excellent engaging rant thank you

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          • #10
            Venting

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            • #11
              Thank you Parkinsonspoet

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              • #12
                God is love and love is free

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                • #13
                  God is love and love is free

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                  • #14
                    Amen! Love it "God is love and love is free" so awesome

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                    • #15
                      Thank you Rach79.....God is love

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