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  • Azalea tongue (another haiku attempt..:)

    Bazooka hot pink,
    wild-cherry drops open new
    swiftly my sweets melt

  • #2
    Its wonderful Katray, I could not even attempt such a feat. I doubt I could spell "haiku" without you, I have trouble with "Kung Pao" as well, (especially the "chicken")

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    • #3
      Thank you most kindly, Robert; with your talent and some time spent on a little trial and error, I'm sure you could master the form. Hmm, making me hungry already for lunch, lol.

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      • #4
        You like Chinese? Give me an address I'll have some sent over immediately..

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        • #5
          this one made me smile

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          • #6
            Robert, you are a riot, my friend! Glad I met ya..

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            • #7
              Thank you, lunar glide; always nice to hear..

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              • #8
                Attempt? Ah, it's a haiku, Katray, not an attempt. Like the other one you posted, successfully sensuous. You can stop attempting now, and just write them 😊

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                • #9
                  Katray Great Haiku!! Enjoyed this !! SWEET!!

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                  • #10
                    Hi, Katray, Anyone who starts a haiku (or anything for that matter) with 'Bazooka hot pink' immediately has my rapt attention. I absolutely love that. And 'swiftly my sweets melt' is truly inspired. This is a tasty haiku indeed!

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                    • #11
                      Thanks so much, Grant!

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                      • #12
                        Thank you greatly, Suz-zen!

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                        • #13
                          truly appreciated, MHenry; glad you enjoyed..

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                          • #14
                            That was fun. It also reminded me of a Kazoo. Bazooka in pink. It leaves a fun mental picture.

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                            • #15
                              Thank you, Brainwreck..

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