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    Today I will rise
    And conquer the world
    If only
    I can get out
    This bed

    I will mow the lawn
    Take out the trash
    Mend the fence
    And sweep up the broken glass –

    You threw at my head
    In a fit of rage

    If only
    I can get out
    This bed

  • #2
    Abuse is a terrible debilitating infliction on the victims. Strong write. It expresses it to the letter. Great job Odonko-ba

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    • #3
      Thank you my friend. Abuse is the excuse of fools unloved. Stay prayed up, and much love Poetess.

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      • Brainwreck
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        Stay prayed up. Love It !!!

    • #4
      Gee, I am a slow poke. I thought it was about depression at first, then I laughed and then Alexandra comments and I understand.
      Lovely pictures to go with your poem. I am more used to depression. I'v been neglected but thankfully never abused.
      Where did you come from?

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      • Odonko-ba
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        South Louisiana Brain. I'm a country boy. Never been abused nor am I an abuser. I sympathize with the victims. Just like writing on different topics. I'm glad I'm able to evoke emotions. It's what we write for. Thanks poet.

      • Brainwreck
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        Cajun? zydeco? crawfish? You can write about anything....grasshopper likes reading you even when I don't understand

      • Odonko-ba
        Odonko-ba commented
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        www.odonkoba.wordpress.com

        I'm so glad you enjoy odonkoba. just started this blog
        come check out my rants with a visual aspect. Hoping to see you there.

    • #5
      Thought-provoking piece. I would read it again, if only I could get out of bed. Love it, Odonko-ba. Brainwreck is right, you have range.

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