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  • Odonko-ba
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    Thank you my friend I am sincerely humbled

  • Odonko-ba
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    Thank you my friend.

  • Odonko-ba
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    Your interpretations are always welcome. Like my own personal hype man. You make a person truly believe. Thank you my friend.

  • Odonko-ba
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    Yes! it sort of just took off and the dance begun.
    I'm glad you enjoyed it. Coming next, Zombie 2.0
    Thanks again poet for your time.

  • Odonko-ba
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    Thank you Brain. Let's just hope we all can understand before it's to late.

  • Odonko-ba
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    Thank you poetess

  • Parkinsonspoet
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    Everyone else has said it in a more coherent way than my thoughts but just wanted to say you fire my imagination

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    Well done as always!

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  • MHenry
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    The pull towards love of brother and sister seems not as strong as the tug towards self-annihilation until there is only one left. And then, I suppose, the one will have to commit suicide to appease its killing soul. Nice write, brother, Odonko-ba!

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Nice pic. :-)

  • grant hayes
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    An incendiary, prophetic piece, Odonko-ba, suffused with exasperated indignation. You seem almost to explode in the last half of the fourth stanza with that stream of six word-pairs. Scorching!

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  • Brainwreck
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    Nice, you nailed it. Too bad it can't be undone by mere mortals. They are just too greedy. And I understood.

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    From one passionate poet to another. I get passion especially about 'waking up'. Beautifully passionate!

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  • Odonko-ba
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    Exactly! A rat race encapsulated under a circus tent, with horse blinders on. Thank you for reading, and understanding.

  • AlexandratheLate
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    AMEN!! We have the ability to feel, perceive, and experience but we have become like a bunch of zombies diseased and mindless, slaves of the media,popularity -- oh I could go on -- see how your passion evokes passion in others. WONDERFUL!!

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