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  • Have a seat on the Celestial Moon

    I'd love a seat on the crescent moon
    looking down at our earth in bloom
    Birds eye view from up above
    Sweethearts in the park make passionate love

    A rocking chair a celestial swoon
    There's comet streaks and sonic booms
    Stars that sparkled from far away
    Are now much closer than yesterday

    A summer night in early June
    Eyes spy a lake with swimming Loons
    As I gaze into outer space
    I feel the sun's warmth upon my face

    Come sit beside me on my crescent moon
    Way up here there's plenty of room
    We'll rock and roll ourselves to sleep
    And when we awake sweet dreams we'll speak





  • #2
    Oh beautiful Bobby, absolutely wonderful. The first line gave me a fantastic visual and you kept that going the whole way through. Loved it.

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    • #3
      Another beautiful poem from a beautiful heart!! There's that contagious positive and romantic spirit. I love it!! Great job!

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      • #4
        Mags and Alexandra, a simple glance at the crescent moon while driving home from visiting my daughter morphed into this moon dance. Don't we love to write! Thank you both my BFF'S.

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        • #5
          I commented to the moon last night, told him he was beautiful It was such a tiny slither and I thought "if I sat on that I would fall off, it's so thin!" So to read this today was very apt indeed. And as Alexandra pointed out, romantic poem too.

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          • #6
            That's funny Mags, really funny! Gotta love serendipity doo da.....

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            • #7
              What a lighthearted poem! Innocent dreams and lovely imagery!

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              • #8
                Vera, thank you always for your astute commentary.

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                • #9
                  Seein that we're all "Moonstruck" I brought it back!

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                  • #10
                    Bobby Del Boy your last stanza is a delight!

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                    • #11
                      This moon poem is adorable.

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                      • #12
                        Thank you. Suz-zen for your enthusiastic and encouraging comment. Always a pleasure!

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                        • #13
                          Lovely poem! I am so glad I read this! I love crescent moon! Thought about writing something about it when I saw it last... didn't sit down long enough to come up for one...This do justice for my neglect! thank you! 😊

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                          • Bobby Del Boy
                            Bobby Del Boy commented
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                            Awesome feedback imrogue, thank you!

                        • #14
                          Thank you so much Lunar Glide. So happy you enjoyed my poem.

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                          • #15
                            Truly beautiful - rolls right off the tongue - begging dreams.

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                            • Bobby Del Boy
                              Bobby Del Boy commented
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                              Thank you Sumyanna, Begging dreams... Awesome feedback indeed!
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