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  • beth
    started a topic Help writing a toast

    Help writing a toast

    Hi! Not sure this is best area to post this request, but here goes! I'm trying to write a toast for my daughter's vow renewal ceremony - (in 10 days!) and I'm stuck on the 1st lines. Suggestions and help would be welcome! I miss my Dad who always wrote toasts for these events. So for the 1st lines, I have:

    It started with a trip to Brazil...

    Alternate 2nd lines:

    And they knew it wasn't "run of the mill"

    or- "and their chemistry was something to distill"

    I don't like either of these very well, but can't think of much else. I have the rest of the toast pretty much the way I like it. Thanks!


  • RobertaD
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    Writing is quite complicated thing and that require lots of vocabulary for writing the good stuff. If you wanted to write a good piece of content have to get professional help or suggestions. Thumb up and please do share on www.assignmentholic.co.uk some ideas here too.

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  • Goggi
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    Great topic
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    Last edited by RhymeLovingWriter; 02-23-2019, 04:03 PM. Reason: Removed link

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  • Anne Harris
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    Your lines are great! How about adding something related to them being not only a couple but also the best of friends?

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