Help writing a toast

[beth]

Hi! Not sure this is best area to post this request, but here goes! I'm trying to write a toast for my daughter's vow renewal ceremony - (in 10 days!) and I'm stuck on the 1st lines. Suggestions and help would be welcome! I miss my Dad who always wrote toasts for these events. So for the 1st lines, I have:

It started with a trip to Brazil...

Alternate 2nd lines:

And they knew it wasn't "run of the mill"

or- "and their chemistry was something to distill"

I don't like either of these very well, but can't think of much else. I have the rest of the toast pretty much the way I like it. Thanks!

[Stanley]

Hello Beth. Could you kindly share the rest of the lines. That way, I can know how best to mix up the flow.

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[Anne Harris]

Your lines are great! How about adding something related to them being not only a couple but also the best of friends?

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[Jack102]

Loved your lines, I hope everything went to plan!

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[Jack102]

Would love to here the rest of the lines!

[jackd123]

Hi Beth, don't give up. Keep thinking about ways to make the poem great and you will get it!

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[jackd123]

Did your daughter rent a photo booth for her vow renewal ceremony?

[jackd123]

Hope your toast went well. I hear outdoor vow renewal ceremonies are beautiful, especially under a canopy of professionally trimmed trees.

[krismartin12]

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[painterofallon]

What about this:

It all started with a trip to Brazil
the beaches were as beautiful as the hills
The sky was like a beautiful painting
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